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First off, I thought it was a good premise, then quite a few things made me confused and bored.
1. Reliving the same life again and again, old but not horrible.
2. The raising a kid to lover trope. If the ML IS 13-14, how old does that make the FL?? Weird af.
3. When Richard/Max/whatever his name is, finds the FL, he wonders why she's scared when he knew for years she was the missing princess, but then allowed MULTIPLE armed soldiers to surround her like she was a criminal.
4. WHY WHY WHYYYYY is the 1st prince so stupidヽ(`Д´)ﾉ╬. He not once, BUT TWICE, had conversations in the wide open, publicly exposing his involvement and his schemes, especially with the FL's older brother, where both the ML and FL witnessed them both times.
So many moments made me frustrated but this is getting long so i'mma leave it here.
While I still find it absolutely silly that the inhumane experiments were being performed right behind a GIANT RED DOOR that apparently NO ONE checked even once, I think that's the only thing I have qualms about.
THIS IS SO CUTE!!!! I love this way more than I thought I was gonna. FL is adorable, everyone is decently funny, a dad who wishes to be close, still loves his children, but still wants what's best for them, even if he knows he can't physically touch them.