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Rereading this remembering they made an anime. I forgot how funny the story and characters are. I love the queen, I think she has to be my favorite. I adore how in love the prince is with the FL.
Be as it may, I had second thoughts on a few things rereading this with a clear head:
- Fl may be young but a little too airheaded.
- Felt that despite her being raised to be the next heir, she took too much after her dad to punch first ask questions later.
- Thinks too much with her fists. Is literally brawn over brain.
- Takes things way too casually and doesn’t think about her actions and their possible consequences. Especially now when she’s literally about to be officially wed to the crown prince and become the future queen and given multiple reminders of this fact.
- The overprotective father trope went on far too long, which then resulted the FL and ML sneaking out to the commoner “church” so I feel he has some part to blame.
- Was a corset absolutely necessary for the foreign noble’s guard to have?
- I'm all for non conflict resolutions, but there's not a single enemy? Why does each one have to be "misunderstood" or simply they had reasons? And the visiting prince and princess. The prince was showing CLEAR signs that he believed and followed the practices of mysogyny of their kingdom, and blatently chastises his sister, but then for some reason acts like a brother with good intentions at the end? Nah.
I have so much more but, commentor "trisaratops" has more pointers I agree with.
Thought this was going to be good. The art style is rather finely detailed, but the overproportions they did for the women turned me off quite a bit. Quite obviously, this is going the harem route, which is sadly overpowering the art style and plot.
That's another thing. WHY did they include the MC being reborn? It changes nothing about the plot at all, and could've been completely omitted. It's only been brought up twice so far, chapters apart. MC is not using it to solidify his standing, he's not using it to build up the town, so what is the point?