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The conversation between the two about physical touch and affection was too glossed over but for the sake of pacing it was good and made sense. Her insecurities are definitely not solved as she doesnt know how to properly communicate them nor does the ml have the proper communication skills either or can think in pov of others well. Which makes for very very good writing as theyre both young af and grew up with no proper guidance from anyone! The lack of emotional intelligence from both parties is so well written and grounded. 10/10. I look forward to both parties character growth!!!
The way the artist executed the sex dolls was so male centered fanservice and the S/A shit was so out of nowhere. Yeah someone can play devils advocate and say "but theyre not real people" "its just dolls so its fine" but its how its said to be made as most human like as possible. Nasty. Then how our characters highkey watched the dolls get broken into and their shit spewing out was so gross man. The artist could had shown that differently and get the same point across. To add on, Ive read too many fantasy crap where the characters has to fight goblins and they never needed this solution plus it was better executed/creative. The closest was using women as bait before ambushing the goblins.
Busting a million for this solution is such a low hanging fruit type of deal and cringe as hell by the way it was written.
I will drop this after I see how the girl (the one beaten up) gets delt with. This was so cringe to read that I need a reward for how bad this intro arc is. (The reward being, to see how that privileged ass girl gets karma) Ive came too far to not see that part at least ( ・_ゝ・)