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IM SORRY BUT I READ THE FIRST FEW CHAPTERS AND THIS IS STRAIGHT UP BULLSHIT??? Yall fr can read anything as long as it has gay sex the art is shit, the colouring is average for this type of genre, the proportions ARE SO MESSED UP HOW CAN ANYONE THINK ABY OF THESE CHARACTERS ARE HOT???? Litelarry the mls face changes every chapter from a skinny big mouthed dude into a round faced small mouthed dude. The main character is so dumb that knowing fully well that the ml wants to turn him gay and shit that he goes into an old sauna with a "testing" room after the ml said that he wants to "test" if the mc was gay or not HE STILL goes, litelarry not realizing the obvious shit he's about to face. The plot is clishe, the characters are shit and the planning is just horrible? The art isnt even consistant at this point. More or less this just proves that yall enjoy everything as long as its gay sex. Disgusting.
As Ive also read stories that included straight sex, people like you dissed it, from the art, from the "shitty" proportions of boobies being too big and the clishe stories. Notice something familiar? Yeah, clearly yall need to calm down on this "if its gay its okay" bullshit because this story and eeeeverything, even the forcible ml is shit. Yeah, soem consepts and things might be fine but the hypocrisy is just too much at this point. Anygays, imo. And if yall try to defend this bullshit come up with good points please.(●￣(ｴ)￣●)
You can have your own opinion, in fact the plot is very cliché, however this is someone's art. Sorry it doesn't look right to you and that upsets you so very deeply. I'd like to see you do better on a long term manga. Oh and good luck coming up with something original and totally never done before.
O-O Dayum---- chillllzz
O-O Dayum---- chillllzz also they do make the boobs big-- and not everything is ok in Yaoi/BL. Uhm..idk man just calm fown I-- this is all fake anyways like chillll--
Instead of being supportive of the art you choose to be a dickhead and a jackass. Go fuck off. I would like to see you draw and colour. Even if the art is mediocre it takes a long time to do. From panels, scripting, coloring, dialogue, etc.. it all takes time to do.
Dudes, mamas, chill. I wasnt upset about the fact that this kind of story is very common and bad, I was just upset about the fact that in other manga when the art is somehow not good, people rage over that fact. But with this gay bullshit you(not meaning you directly just overall the people who are obsessed with these) will read and support anything, any form of shit. For example the women in the other manga are unrealistic, people make a fuss about it. But then the men in these are always the dazzling men which is also highly unrealistic considering that these kinda people want the female characters to be realistic but then the males can appeal to eveeeery fantasy.
Then, this plot is clishe, the plot in other stories is clishe, but then the other story only gets hate for it.
Yeah, the art is inconsistant, but as I said some parts of it its good. Its just that the below average art plus the shittier than the normal mc and ml just ruined the story for me. Overall I started reading this if this had good characters and somehow interesting plot but I was wrong. Ive also made a few webtoons myself, I know the struggle but coming up with new and exciting ideas is pretty easy and nescesary if you want people (other than fujoshis) to like the webtoon.
I just do not understand why this webtoon gets this amount of love without no one noticing the obvious flaws and only blinded by... you know it, gay sex! (￣∇￣")
Oh my, someone is offended... yes, I would tell the dude my critizism to their face. Its blatantly obvious what the mistakes of thids webtoon are and how to fix them? Ir are you one of those fujoshis who is also blinded by gay sex?!?!? Σ( ￣□￣||)
Yeye, been there done that. I support the development and Im hoping to see it but I just tried to open yall eyes to see how unfair yall are being to other webtoons. （￣へ￣）
What, so you havent read a webtoon including straight segs? Im just trying to show there that this art is decent, this plot is bad, the story is meh, the characters are meh and all that sh but yall still support it fuming to see more gay sex but then in a straight webtoon when the bobos are big or the story is average yall rage over it. This has unrealistic characters, those other webtoons have unrealistic characters but yall still support this one since it has gay segs.
Yeah---- I just hope people realize that they dont have the right to rage over unrealistic bodies and plots in other webtoons when they support any story with gay sex that includes unrealistic bodies and plots---- Daymn-- people are quite biased--
no the art is fine and the theme too. its just because it has gay sex that's why we/i like it. i can barely find manga that has open(?) relationship like this. i like it when the dom lets other people use his sub while he watch, there's barely any manga like that here, if im not wrong this author is the only one who makes that kind of story. understand that people has different preference, its like you're literally saying we have shit taste and that's what i call bullshit coming out of your mouth. the characters are hot and looks fine, art is art, story is story. if you don't like it then you can share your opinion more nicely. just reading this comment makes me think that you also have "bullshit" personality. pls stfu.
u can say something about the plot but not the art, pls if u are an artist too don’t ever said something like “the art is shit” that’s just a disgrace to the arts, man i do get it that u are riled up bcoz of lil support bout straight segs like with those bigs boobs and all but seriously only the smuts is good not the plot and this story? we ain’t just reading just bcoz it’s gay segs bullshit wtf we do stay bcoz of the plot and how it gonna end up if it’s good or bad but yeah whatever but pls don’t ever said something about art bcoz u shouldn’t and u couldn’t be an artist if u are like that and if u think u are just making this opinion so that this masterpiece gonna improve in ur fcking way lol sorry but u are just being a jerk and talking shit about someone’s art so u need to stop this kinda attitude and it’s the authors ART i’m sure u know what does means if u are a real artist urself
Not all of us only like webtoons for gay sex. Don't assume that we like it only for that. We obviously know that there are many other manhwas, webtoons, comics etc.. out there. Don't just categorize all of us for only reading it for the gay shut and only think itsngood becauseits yaoi. Some of are here for the art and plot.
Sorry for the misspelling!
Yea yea , but I just dont get if the story is bad and the art os mediocre, why praise it so much? Im sorry if I came off a bit offensive but I would just like to know what is it about these kinds of webtoons and stories that keeps everyone reading them?
..... eh? I dont know the author, I do not care about the author so why bring them up? I read all kinds of sick shit and almost every genre. If you dont have the time to look at my profile to see what Ive read, why make up pointless shit about me dude #depress
Actually-- uhm dude, what is you talkin about- ok lemme just state the fact that- the male bodies are actually a body type but for female bodies they are sometimes accurate, but most the time they make the boobs very big- and we literally don't always support the "OMG I LOVE GAY SEX TEEHEE" like--- FHDUSIFD BOI there is always something wrong with the Male Top's DICK LIKE IT'S HUGE and then female bodies are like- Skinny waist legend, big boobs, and big ass I-- plus aren't you also one of those who are judging over the fact that the art is shit and the body proportions aren't good or the body type is unrealistic-- honestly people are biased but we can't do anything about it. And like- I read these just for the fun of it because I want to know what the outcome will be. Yeah sometimes it's messed up asf but dude if you really think about it this is all fake. Yes there are things that are actually happening but like- chill. Idk when people say we fetishize BL and shit it pisses me off because like-- don't a lot of guys/girls also fetishize females with, "Omg look at her tits or her thighs blah blah" like sorry idk. In a way you don't have the right to rage over the somewhat unrealistic body types and plot, as well as art. Dunno what you're trying to get at tbh because it seems like you're saying why do we read these stories/comics with gay sex, somewhat unrealistic body types, and the plot is shit and the art is shit. You're basically being one of them. O-O You just proved that you're one of them--- Pftahah also have you tried drawing? Drawing the same damn face is hard child- And not all of us dissed the art style of a hetero story. Some people just want the art to be a specific way, like how you're saying that the art is trash- Dunno man you're the same as the people who diss hetero shit. (☞ﾟヮﾟ)☞
Im even more confused, we know that this is an illegal af website in where everything is stolen from other websites which means that usually the authors dont know shit or dont give a shit. I was dissing the art since I wanted to see peoples reactions who usually diss the other webtoons who make the same mistakes art wise.
No, it wouldnt hurt me since I know its only teasing to get me annoyed since I did that just now to try and get answers on why tf is the yaoi and bl community so biased?
Yeah, I might have gone too overboard with bashing the art, but seriously, why make it look like the main characters has boobies? (〜￣△￣)〜
TYSM FOR TRANSLATING DUDE!!!!!! SENDING ALL SUPPORT^ ^