I'm rereading it and, while it definitely is insanely good, the beginning of their IRL relationship is just so unrealistic They barely just met, ML is acting way too forward, borderline like a creep ngl, and MC is already saying he has feelings for him, despite ML's crazy behaviour. Second time they see each other outside of the cafe and ML be putting down the car seat and kissing his neck without consent? It's not even about attraction bc sure they can get spicy right away, who cares, but what is MC doing talking about having feelings for the ML. Y'all haven't even had a proper conversation yet.
The translation in chapter 11 is a bit weird or maybe worded weirdly; ML is listing possible turn offs as to why MC would reject him and he says "Is it because I'm a guy", so why is MC's reaction to that "How did you know I dated guys?". Makes no sense. If ML knew MC dated men then why would be list it as a turn off?
No, then it'd be a whole different question and it'd be worded differently, not added to the "is it because" list he's throwing at him. Since ML knows MC dates men he could've said something along the lines of "I know it's not because I'm a guy.", which would promptly reveal that he knows about it. Either way the MC's response is what doesn't make sense here; the natural progression here should be MC either admitting that it's not because of that because he does indeed date men, or not admitting it by wiggling his way out of answering completely. So, either the question should've been worded differently or the answer, for the word exchange to make any sense.










First of all, not the kid actually sexually assaulting the MC.. twice! Bad fucking move. Secondly, I can't help but keep getting secondhand embarrassment every time MC asks for help, like all the ML does is help you, genuinely what was the point of threatening him. And them hints he gets aren't even the least bit helpful if he can't understand them before they reveal the theme on the show so what's the point anyway? The only actually useful hint the ML shared was about the consolation match. Also, the way the MC goes back and forth with his ex is pissing me off; I haven't been in this type of situation so I can't possibly know how I would personally act, but it's frustrating how he swears he's gonna cut him off and then he goes back to him again and again.