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I feel like this had the potential to be a really interesting story. the plot was most definitely rushed to become summarized and somewhat digestible for a short story because you get the basic outline and idea of it when you, well, read in between the lines but it just wasn’t all that well done and everything but the art was just GORGEOUS like genuine peak, loved the composition with the paper dolls like?? okay cleared the platee
nah but I really think this had the potential, just not necessarily the right execution and I hope their next work is more throughly planned out :]
some of you are dramatic as hell I hope you all know that