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So... No consequences for his actions? The mother is the monster because she didn't accept him killing the innocent? Sorry, can't really empathize with him... I only hope he improves because... The god in the story "learnt from his wife's love and repented"? And what did he do to atone for the lives lost in his war games? Being sorry isn't enough, an yet he got his wife and all. And Shuraka isn't even sorry. Nope. Sorry, people learn through consequences for their actions, not by being bailed out by others who love them just because (I understand pitying a kid, but what does he even see in this adult him? He's cute, but hasn't even treated him all that well, not really).
... Sorry for the rant, I promise I don't hate the story, I have high hopes for it ┗( T﹏T )┛