One of my biggest pet peeves is dialogue that doesn't make sense. It not like its grammatically off, it's just so stiff and doesn't contextually make sense half the time.
E.g C.11 Lowen says 'This place is smaller than I expected' which makes no sense because in C. 7 Lowen remarks that Hyeon is 'probably in debt' ( cause he works multiple jobs) like 'lots of people in new york'.
So why would he be living in a big apartment?
I have 0 idea what the difference between dream productions and dream entertainment is, nor do I know what the beef is between them.
For all I understand (and I understand little), dream productions is a part of dream entertainment. Dream productions manages the production stuff ofc and dream entertainment manages the artists. The beef is about who gets to be at the top of them though, hence the two sides about one favoring executive director yoon and the other full of people against the idea of him running dream productions. Since jay has a lot of dream productions' stocks, I think that is also the reason why that old fart wants him to sell his stocks so that dream productions can be his.
Someone correct me if I am wrong please lol
It's so cliche that the author lowkey expects you to fill in the blanks, and deceive your mind into thinking that there's any substance. No build up, no suspense, shit just happens. So much shit happens in the first 2 chapters when they should really just be introducing the mc and his circumstances but instead their already introducing his trauma, and how his life is going downhill.
I don't give a shit.
I don't know this character well enough to give a flying fuck. There's zero time to process what is even going on, cause as soon as something important happens something else equally as important happens again. Which leads the Mc to have the personality of a dirty flipflop, and act like some kind of npc cause he has no time to react to anything. If your gonna be cliche MAKE IT GOOD, MAKE IT MAKE SENSE
First 3/4 okay, last 1/4 was stupid as hell? Why is MC angry that ML didn't tell him that he knew MC had powers? If you thought you were the only person with powers, would you not be happy that your SO had them too??? Why would you get so angry that you- (*********Spoiler*********) wipe your effing memories? Makes zero sense. It was a lie by omission, I get being slightly annoyed, maybe angry, but MC reaction made no sense at all. The 'lie' didnt change anything about their relationship, so why tf was it such a huge plot point. Also why did the author make MC sus ML out cause of all the 'coincidental' accidents, then not have him ask or even wonder if he caused them- like if ML had admitted to causing them, then I GUESS that would be a reason for his amnesia-BS.
And the thing that really solidified MC knowing that ML had powers was ML saving him from being flattened by a sign. Brudda saved his ass from dying and MC gets angry, LIKE WTF IF THIS BITCH ANGRY ABOUT????????
I think that he felt used and betrayed by the seme!!
If that was me I would be fucking pissed too but not to the point that I would erase my memories.
For the first 50 chapters I felt like the seme never really liked the uke for me it was more like he just wanted someone to relate to. He just wanted the uke to feel the same way as he did aka miserable.
(I might be wrong, I could have read the whole story wrong. Idk)
I left and came back you're telling me they're STILL IN A FLASHBACK???
ITS BEEN 5 MONTHS. FIVE.