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2 thing that keep bothering me nwhen reading this,
1. The maid mention want freedom, but when Mc offer it, she then don't really want it?
2. The family want to keep Leon ability secret, but then it already revealed to many ppl, due to the hint(by the maid) and linked to potion given by Leon (truthfully, I don't think giving out potions to everyone is a smart move by Leon, instead he could just give to a few ppl in the mage tower, eg like the most important person or ppl he indebted to only (the grandpa). (since he also want to keep low profile too)