This whole thing is outright adorable, I love oir MC being a dom bott so much and yes he was such an asshole at first but he became better and they're now so adorable and their communication skills are so nice and the ml is so adorable and such a sweetheart.
I'm quite invested in the 2nd couple too! Ex guy was such an asshole and has such a backstory and learning to not be an asshole is such a nice concept and he's so adorable, I think author-nim is gearing him up to be the bott too, but I truly want him to be sub appha top with dom beta bott cause that would be so hot but then it'd be a similar dynamic to 1st couple. I just like sub tops so much! And service tops are the best too!!! Dom botts are so delicious the eay they make the tops cry during sex so delicious!!! So I hope 2nd couple also have that dynamic with subby service top ex guy and dom assertive bott rich guy (≧∀≦)
The premise of this is actually very adorable if they just mad it longer and expounded more on each of the individual arcs! The concept is nice with a shy, nerd, but a secret looker of a top while the bott is very tsun, straight, but sees the top's potential. It's just so rushed that their character development falls very flat and feels all over the place, it's like you've accidentally pressed the skip button on the lore portion of the story and now you can't make clear heads or tails of the following scenes. Although you can still follow what is happening, it feels super rushed, and no development in between.
It was such a cute concept thought that I can agree on
BROKE DEPRESSED OLDER GUY UKE IS THE BEST!!!!!! LET'S SAY IT AGAIN!!! BROKE DEPRESSED OLDER GUY UKE!!!! BROKE DEPRESSED OLDER GUY UKE!!!!!
That was so sweet for such a grim setting LMAO I love how despite how short it was it carried the message well. I love Satomi's devotion to Tsubame, but he doesn't really force Tsubame into anything he doesn't really like. He takes care of Tsubame even though he doesn't know how to, he learns so that he can. I love the part where Kuji sold Tsubame and Satomi bid for Tsubame and then won him by a gamble that was cute af.
Anyways, I just loved the story so much, and the after panels are just so adorable! I wish them happiness










HELL YEAAAAAH ENEMIES TO LOVERS? LOVE RIVALS TO LOVERS? DOOMED YAOI?!?!? OLD MAN YAOI?!?!? TSUNDERE TOP?!?!? MY FUCKING GOD THESE CHECKS OUT A LOOOOOT OF MY LISTS AND I'M HERE FOR IT!