I feel like the pacing of the story is rather slow almost unnecessarily slow and on top of that the chapters are short - the last 3 ch could easily be combined. The story is drawing out longer then it necessary needs to...i think im going to drop this for now and come back after a few weeks
So many places, which shall remain unnamed, have gone out in flames. Please do not speak the name of our flower, from which we drink its sweet nectar—not even in secret or in jest.
Yeonjo already knows how perceptive HeeRyang was prior to running away. He knew this man would not believe that's his body and warned ole boy not to try to lie to him. The moment ole boy went into that room & wasn't going bananas over the blood & chains where Yeonjo was being held CAPTIVEEEE. Strike 1. The little to no hysterics over his death. Strike 2. ANNNNNDDDD refusing to see the body. ITS A WRAP!!!!! HeeRyang has studied at the College of Yeonjo and graduated at top of his class. Cum Laude. The mole? The very distinct mole fading. Albet bashed up face & swollen would still be prominent, so he was already suspicious from then. The final nail in the coffin is this ole chap who doesn't have the smarts to at least ack hysterical. EEEYUUCK.