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Can someone recommend bl where the top is MAD clingy?
Shape of sympathy is really good
men being PATHETIC MMMMMMMH NICE:
https://www.mangago.me/home/mangalist/2465806/
is he a golden retriever?:
https://www.mangago.me/home/mangalist/2503878/
I think either checkmate (tan)
/ or stalkers game would be really good for you
The plot was confusing and the layout of the panels wasn’t helping.
All the characters looked the same like there wasn’t a singe distinct thing about the 2 couples .
The whole thing felt rushed and unrealistic.
So did the 2 blondes know each other? Did they stalk people together??
There wasn’t enough urgency like I get it the drained character who hates their life but omg if I were in the situation I’d be genuinely freaked out sleeping in a hotel every night.
And Omg if you’re going to do a yandre do it right . The blonde was too practical just sitting on his couch solving a rubix cube?
Speaking of the blonde what even was his name? Like I feel like we never got to that.
And the stalker was just too smart to be that stupid. Like do you know what I mean?
Your post is multiple levels of confusing tbh. And I think you might have just not been the target audience for this theme. ^^;
First things first, all characters had plenty if traits to differentiate between one another, the only ones who didn't were that one co-worker that said he couldn't help anymore and the co-worker friend who had a stalker himself, but that was due to some panels depicting them both with black hair once or twice.
Secondly, the plot was PLENTY detailed, but it's a mature plot that is based on psychological matters, which might just not be up your alley. The plot is also plenty realistic (if one understands how stalkers and psyche functions), so I think you just do not understand the whole psychology aspect of it all to be honest. There could certainly have been more detail added to it all, but everything except the last few chapters was definitely not rushed in terms of writing. (Reminder: Not going into full detail to 100% does NOT equal rushing.)
Third: Every person has their very own way of reacting to this scenario or really ANY other in life. People will not react the same. You might disagree with the MCs reactions, but they are based on his trauma and exhaustion as well as much more nuanced aspects of him. And many people irl would likely follow in his footsteps instead of freaking out.
I fail to see what you mean by urgency tho. The author did a very good job making it blatantly clear how unwell the MC is feeling but ultimately giving in and succumbing to his mental problems. You'll have to elaborate on what you mean by urgency. If this is really just about him not freaking out, then you might have just not understood the MCs point of view/his life and hence his choices.
The only one in this story that borders a yandere is the side character stalker, of which we know not nearly anough to label him. (Just because he seems kind and is suggested to be a stalker too does not equal him being a yandere.)
I think you honestly simply did not understand his character. He is authority figure in the relationship, the author made that absolutely clear. He barges in whenever he pleases, treats the MC however he pleases and is confident enough that his victim will not retaliate. Him sitting on the couch and playing is perfectly in synch with what his character is all about: Being a nonchalant, intrusive and entirely domineering invader in the MCs life.
If you read till the last chapter, there is a note that revealed the last chapter finally name dropped him. Which is also a good writing aspect, since not once before did the MC refer to him by name until then, which is a great display of the psychological aspect and distance between the two characters. ^^
The story is not a pleasant one for sure, but it wasn't meant to be.
There are minor issues, but the author knew had realized that themselves and mentioned it at the end (likely because they are still learning). So calling this comic trash is quite a bit of overkill given this tackled a heavy topic but did a great job displaying mental problems in a realistic way, in detail and without giving a pretty nonsensical lovestory ending (because that is far from what the ending was in reality).
I get that you dislike it, but I have to heavily disagree with pretty much everything you said given it's factually really not a bad comic based on writing and character psychology, etc.. The only thing I agree with is a panel issue being there, or sometimes misplaced pages due to the uploaders, but the story really wasn't confusing even with that in mind and it certainly wasn't the authors fault for the misplaced pages. That's always important to keep in mind when reviewing/judging a work: You gotta differentiate between personal things, the authors work, details and nuances, preferences and most of all the translators and scanlators potentially playing a role in causing problems and hence noting that seperately and not downgrading the comic itself for that. Even some of the greatest works on here have had shitty translations after all. XD
Nooo i agree w you so much everything u saod is basically why i love this manhwa alot its actually one of my favourites because of all the psychological undertones with MCs behaviour, its one the few storys that i can actually reread and not get bored