if someone was wondering its NOT released yet, this means that you won't be able to find the raw. :( also if you see at when the chaps were released you will find out that it took YEARS to release one... if that author didn't stop this serie it should be + or - next year... this is just based one the time that it took him to release the last one... :( nothing is sure :(
if someone knows something pls let me know ;) (btw if you answer it i can see it with the new site thing ;) )
too short and to unrealistic.
i wouldn't mind the fact that something like that could never happen if it conveyed a feeling or some dort of emotion. its too short... i didnt feel anything while reading it. this made me concentrate on the plot that is... well its a yaoi one shot... the plot is the average bad.
when the author is going to write a real chapter??? :,(