the development was alright and well until ch. 4 but then it looked like the magaka realized "oh shit this needs to end in one chapter!" and threw that ending.. and there is plenty of instances they could have gone differently with the plot to make the ending less sudden.. really desapointing to be honest.
People who didn't read the novel saying Guangyao is a villain, I have one thing to say - pay attention
Guangyao IS a villain though.. if you think that uhhh.. "" is the villain, then nah he aint he just wanted to avenge "that person" (you probably know who im talking abt)
it's probs not the character you are implying as the villain so im sorry for assuming. (to me "" isn't the villain)
JGY is still a villain for doing thats so
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Also, the real villain for me is JGS and Wen Clan. JGY wouldn't be like this if it werent for JGS. and Wen Clan is just da worst (exluding WenNing & Wen Qing)










i think there's a missing page?
can u tell me between which pages?
between 12 and 13 in chapter 4
fuck how did i not notice this lemme reupload rq!
i was not sure but it just seemed like he started touching lil' urushibara way too suddenly
reupload was just approved! ty for telling me!
i'm glad i was of help