Omg im so irritated. Everyone in this story is so bland. Esp the Ml he lit fell in love with the FL at first glance or something. In the behinning he was kinda interesting but then after a while we can dee his only persoanlity is to be the lover of the FL his actions are so predictable and its irritating
This story is def good. It started off amazing, but then it got weird. Why were there so many scenes of Qin as a child?? And why was it so ?? Sexual connotation…. Somethig something…. i mean like ik their mental age is different. But like its just weird.
Also the plot got kinda confusing as soon as they started tlaking about some fragmenting soul stuff. Like i srsly couldn’y keep a track of what wad going on, and there wwre too many side stories??? Or like stories that deviated from the main event.., maybe im too dumb or like skipped over too many words idk
tbf the pace began to get faster when the story get serious. also in my exp most Chinese webtoon with intricate(complex) plot always suck at explanation(delivery). it doesn't matter even if it is an original webtoon. somehow they always have problem with writing the dialogues. maybe much of it also lost in translation who knows











I cant believe AI has advanced sm that even i couldnt tell it was AI until later