The art was beautiful, but the story lacked depth and emotion!
I disliked reading the first story, but the second one was ok
I feel exactly the opposite, loved the first story because of the amazing depth to it. One has to read between the lines, it's not expressed in a obvious way but I felt there was a lot going on underneath the surface. I feel that I can really relate to the uke due to my own experience with mental health issues and depression in particular.
Reading it I was like, wow, it went fast!
I expected it to go in one direction
(Confession of love, soppy apology, happy ever after)
I wanted it to go in one direction
(Uke leaves seme, wins races and gets to the top with "his own power" in racing)
But it actually went in a completely different direction which I loved!
I love when stories are surprising and make you think!
He came back with all his pride and you can tell they've got a nice little relationship now, at least enough to satisfy those who need that happy ever after in a story!
Here's the evidence I've gathered so far, in my theory that Michiru is maybe a warecat whose mum and dad were both cats, andd he's some sort of mix betwèen two types of cat!
1 he can heal shiou's wounds by licking them, and his wounds can be healed with a lick
2 the dogs pet says his MUM was rare, leading me to think female cat
3 that time he looks like a cat when Shiou gets shot
4 he can smell the catnip in Kakami's cologne
5 his current mother is his adoptive mother
I think that's all I've thought of, sure there's probably more
sometimes people ship people I never even think of together, in ways I would never imagine
But it's pretty fun to see