idk if it’s the translation but the writing is so off and feels like a child wrote the dialogue. such a waste too cause the children are so adorable in this story
i feel like i’ve lost brain cells reading this. when you think it can’t get worse, the story proves you wrong
i thought this was gna mostly be a childcare manhwa :( the kids are so cute too so such a shame…and the dialogue is so cringey + the plot isn’t executed in a flowing way, making it hard to get into the story
the comments are so weird? they make the story seem so bad and after i read it, i don’t see the big issue…they thought she was a spy and apparently the whole world hates the fourth order so that’s prob why they mistreated her and threatened her cause they were desperate too but once they realize she’s truly not from this world they apologized and explained. like am i reading it wrong?
thought it was bad translation back then but even the officials have lost me. right when i think i get where this is going, they lose me
i saw this on tiktok a couple times and the synopsis and comments made me rlly dislike it bc mom + daughter + man…gross but i wanted to peak at the smexy scenes after seeing snips on tiktok and wow the art is *chefs kiss* and all these secrets and mystery has me hooked. I NEED TO KNOW NOW!! i feel rlly bad for jae eon tho, until they do his character dirty(cause i feel like they just might), i hope he finds love
this author is too good at writing stories. i need this completed now
there’s too many lily and siren who is the og, the current and who is apart of the game. are lily and the warrior supposed to be different ppl/entities. I need some labels or a chart or SOEMTHING
at first, i was like yea, tell those aholes they suck for being mean but they were being brainwashed for 3 months and then we still don’t even understand to what extent the plant drug thingy does as it seems like whoever eats it just suddenly begs for “grace’s” attention. so the fact that mc is like fuck all of you after finding out how strong the dark magic is so weird. esp bc it’s so obvious they’re not speaking/acting out of true will. the author is just being so weird and ifl they’re trying so hard to find some way to make the 3 og ml unlikeable that we don’t question why mc hates them. also, her magic is totally fine now apparently so idk why she doesn’t just heal everyone instead of looking for holy water
i’m lowk sad now bc i thought the duke was the hidden ml and the blonde guy was her dad and the dragon was like his pet or something and he just didn’t want to tell her lolll mom and dad needs justice bc their forbidden love sounds so interesting and im so sad for her dad. i hope the mom and fl went back to stay with the dad when they were kicked out of the palace
the art, amazing. the smut scenes, nice. but they just had to make the top absolute trash. and what’s even worse is that he could’ve totally been cool if the author didn’t make him a rapist who forcefully baby traps the bottom bc some of the things he did was pretty sweet and i liked his jealousy loll plus the plot was actually good too with the whole noble family and curse thing. literally the way the top was written is the only thing that absolutely ruined what could’ve been
everyone wants to know who’s endgame but i’m tryna get spoilers on blondie’s identity
how did we go from a baddie vamp in a (somewhat) secure relationship to psycho ass women who have some skewed views on love and need therapy asap (esp that obsessive gf)
the story isn’t bad by any means but it’s really slow paced and doesn’t have anything that’s keeping me hooked. it’s kind of just going in circles. but the art is beautiful
dropped as soon as she considered getting help from her brother. fl is dumb asf and annoys me too much
ugh i hate when authors make the girls stupidly oblivious. like girl, what friend would kiss/snuggle your neck like that? honestly even the way he be kissing your face is a sign alr. just bc you’ve never been in a relationship, you don’t know what is friendly and what isn’t?!
they just had to add a second ML, make him hot, and give them history I hate this typa angst and love triangles where there’s no obvious side(it seems like). there’s gna need to be a throuple now or i drop
complaining that she’s weak when she literally says in her first life that she wasn’t able to go against the book bc it wouldn’t let her or the characters have free will. and did we forget she wants to go home. ofc, she’s gna listen to the book so she can go home. and if in your first life, the book made all the rules, why would you not believe that someone’s intentions are not out of their free will but are forced from a book or that the ml is gna end up with og fl again. she only just found out that ml is free from the book. my only complaint is the bad translation but it can’t be helped and it’s still understandable so i’m grateful for it.