beta
Quick paced. No story development. No character development either so they’re easy to forget. It doesn’t explain how the cultivation works and nothing follows logical sense. It jumps around so much like having the protagonist suddenly beat the main villain without building up the protagonist character and those that support and build his role to make him more significant. Not to mention that girl is so annoying (the one who used Ye Qian as scapegoat)
This is promising and a very original concept. But... where’s chapter 19??? Two chapters 18 but skips to chapter 20 ;-;-;-;