At the beginning of the series the story was really detailed and well written but it slowly began to grow plot holes and unnecessary timeskips to the future (which just bores the reader?)… I wish the author didn’t rush into the story too much and kept the pace it was going at at first… But other than that it is well made and has beautiful art!
what are the plot holes and unnecessary timeskips? mari
I don't know about you, but i personnally would have liked to see a little bit longer of the aftermath of < THE sofa scene > in ch81 (what did they talk about before Cirrus went home? What did Cirrus say to Skylar before coming home?) _ and also i got frustrated not to see a little bit longer in Chapter 89 when Sky and Ci had breakfast together before school, it was cool as a cliffhanger but frustrating!! That we didn't get to see what happened after Sky went away and Cirrus caught up with him, holding Skylar's face and saying '' now it's for me to decide '' or something. It looked like they were about to kiss and then *time skip* lol
I don't know about you, but i personnally would have liked to see a little bit longer of the aftermath of < THE sofa scene > in ch81 (what did they talk about before Cirrus went home? What did Cirrus say ... CherryTree
those aren't plotholes lol what??? i think in general you can understand what happens in most of the scenes you talked about, and if the author just ends the chapter there then that means there was nothing meaningful to write or the scene just ended there and there's no need to draw them saying goodbye or whatever.
those aren't plotholes lol what??? i think in general you can understand what happens in most of the scenes you talked about, and if the author just ends the chapter there then that means there was nothing mean... hatdiggitydog
I will be allright but for me those timeskips (which are not really plot holes. Ok.) those made me stay '' on tension '' rather than '' feeling relaxed '' at the end of those chapters but okay i'll talk with my personnal diary next time that happens to vent my frustration. (And i'll also go read fanfiction!) _ i get it that Pas Kim is genius at building tension and baked us great cliffhangers for Season 2, i just hope we get satisying /quality time between Sky and Ci in Season 3 x-)
I will be allright but for me those timeskips (which are not really plot holes. Ok.) those made me stay '' on tension '' rather than '' feeling relaxed '' at the end of those chapters but okay i'll talk with my... CherryTree
yeah i understand what you mean about being curious and tense about what happens i get that way too. but the author just did that a lot in her story. so i kinda concluded that they probably just wanna keep the reader curious and probably nothing important happened after those scenes. and i feel like when the author does end the scene suddenly and something important did actually happen, they usually bring up that scene in another chapter as a flashback yk or stuff like that i guess
At the beginning of the series the story was really detailed and well written but it slowly began to grow plot holes and unnecessary timeskips to the future (which just bores the reader?)… I wish the author didn’t rush into the story too much and kept the pace it was going at at first… But other than that it is well made and has beautiful art!
what are the plot holes and unnecessary timeskips?
Btw we have fanfiction for the unnecessary timeskips! :-) _ (on AO3 = Archives of our own)
I don't know about you, but i personnally would have liked to see a little bit longer of the aftermath of < THE sofa scene > in ch81 (what did they talk about before Cirrus went home? What did Cirrus say to Skylar before coming home?) _ and also i got frustrated not to see a little bit longer in Chapter 89 when Sky and Ci had breakfast together before school, it was cool as a cliffhanger but frustrating!! That we didn't get to see what happened after Sky went away and Cirrus caught up with him, holding Skylar's face and saying '' now it's for me to decide '' or something. It looked like they were about to kiss and then *time skip* lol
those aren't plotholes lol what??? i think in general you can understand what happens in most of the scenes you talked about, and if the author just ends the chapter there then that means there was nothing meaningful to write or the scene just ended there and there's no need to draw them saying goodbye or whatever.
I will be allright but for me those timeskips (which are not really plot holes. Ok.) those made me stay '' on tension '' rather than '' feeling relaxed '' at the end of those chapters but okay i'll talk with my personnal diary next time that happens to vent my frustration. (And i'll also go read fanfiction!) _ i get it that Pas Kim is genius at building tension and baked us great cliffhangers for Season 2, i just hope we get satisying /quality time between Sky and Ci in Season 3 x-)
yeah i understand what you mean about being curious and tense about what happens i get that way too. but the author just did that a lot in her story. so i kinda concluded that they probably just wanna keep the reader curious and probably nothing important happened after those scenes. and i feel like when the author does end the scene suddenly and something important did actually happen, they usually bring up that scene in another chapter as a flashback yk or stuff like that i guess