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No offense, but the characters are so damn plain, bro. The draws/design are nice but for now (for everything that I've seen so far) the story/plot is so poorly showed. We have innumerous panels with sex scenes that r supposed to make us feel something (??) when we barely know the characters or the dynamics of the relationship (I mean something other than just sex). There's no background to lean on (and I'm not talking about the few lines about how they met or how they barely know each other outside their apartments (well yah the mystery, I understand...)).

What I'm trying to say is: I want to see the love the author says they feel for each other, I want to "feel" what they "feel" and being sure that "yeah, I understand the suffering and the pain because Ik and feel that they love each other (sm) that they don't want to be separated by anything or anyone". The main couple for now are just two random mans having sex and whatnot .

Anyways, I feel that everything is so barely/poorly showed (for reference, there's a big difference between telling and showing). And yeah, okay, we do have some clues that there's a emotional connection but, fr, I would like to see something deeper than that.

Overall, this story has a great potential but damn how you gon' create a fantasy world with different powers, groups and characters and you simply do not invest your time developing it, introducing it, showing it first thing first. Built the fundamental things first and then show the sex, the grief, the suffering and all the other emotions 'cause in that moment the characters will grow on the readers.

There's so much interesting stuff here that it's kinda sad the way we are on chapter 20's and the world of the plot remains undiscovered. I still wanna know about the power dynamics, and still I prefer to get to know the members names first (mc team) than "read" 3 chapters of sex scenes (I ain't gonna talk about the way the whole confined/cuffs thing is kinda problematic although the mc seems to be enjoying the sex and wtv, he's clearly emotionally needy and unstable due to work stress)

Still going to read it but I hope to see more of the plot (⌒▽⌒)

Saw all this reviews/comments/topics and didn't even tried to read it, preserving my eyes from this (〜￣△￣)〜