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Why tf does this have a romance tag im so fucking scared for the next chapters bro

This is the 1st time I’ve seen someone sexualise a man sm. I mean it’s only Maru from the men’s side getting sexualised but it’s better than it being no man and just the ladies. This is so refreshing honestly.

Then don’t read it

I forgot who da fuck that old man?

I knew the writing was leading up to Derick being in love with Penelope I said it for a LONG time now.

Just read and move on honestly I don’t understand what you guys expect out of a special from the main story. The reason they separated it from the main story was cause they made it longer than usual special episodes but people still complain.do you see other artist putting this much effort for their side stories so much so that there’s more than 10chapyers ? Also complaining about the “artstyle getting worse” pmo. If you’re so mad at their art work not being consistent you try doing 1000+ pages of just art. People expected the art to stay consistent or getting better are totally out of touch with how things work in the real world. It’s one thing to complain but it’s another to complain whilst also pirating the media. You obviously didn’t pay for this so why are you complaining about how long it is or isn’t.

My first bl wasn’t bl it was yuri

Wtf is happening in the plot i don’t even know if any of the previous chapters mattered…

I think this story could’ve been much more interesting and had many cool ideas which sadly did not go through and I don’t think will be relevant to the ending. most of the story plot lines weren’t fully thought through and there are gaps in parts of the story which are left not explained or explored.

I think characters are written very simply it’s usually pretty black and white with the characters, I’ve seen the author try to explore with a extremely good people with personality(spice ig) with the 1st saintess, I can see that the author is trying to convey a more complex and deeper story with the characters but I don’t think it’s conveyed that well.

For example the fl of the story in the original world was a singer who lost their ability to sing which caused them to self exit this was so weirdly integrated with the main story, the fl tries hard to self exit cause of inability to speak but when they regain this ability back it’s not mentioned often, the fl lead isn’t shown her journey of gaining her voice back or anything of that sort or the complex emotions of finally getting her voice back or the fear of losing this ability again. If I were to read the recent chapters I wouldn’t be able to tell that the fl LOVES singing to that extent.

And I also don’t like when characters who reincarnate have not gone through the life experience of the host character they took over but somehow they act as though they have. It feels very fake when the experiences they are going through are completely different, it feels like claimed pity that isn’t related at all to them. I think in my opinion the author didn’t do a good job at conveying the fl empathy? It was all too surface level for me, wasn’t deeply talked about so the characters behaviors seemed more like third party sympathy which was used to convey public support.

But this is all my conceited opinion of what I didn’t like about the story. There are obviously things I do like about the story but the negatives always tend to stick out more to me

The fact that the duke is treated peony~~ like shit~ because he couldn’t get the girl is annoyingggg~~ lalalala it’s annoyinggg~
I bet the duke listens to that one song that goes like “nice guys always finish last” he looks and is the pick me guy but without the girl