ppl hate on maxi for just now learning how to stand up for herself after years and years of abuse but dont bat an eye with this man who's one more duke croyso—basically just a deterrent for her growth, never letting her speak, always so ready to lash out at her, and deciding everything for her. only this time it's her spouse doing it and it's out of "love"
how to say... it's just another, probably tamer, form of abuse lmao making maxi soooooo dependent of him, hating it when she tries to use her wings, and isolating her from ppl helping her. this isnt being protective. it's literally just chaining her to a gilded cage.
NOOOONONO im gonna gush abt this u guys dont get ittttt if he was like any other slop ML, he wouldve been suspicious of Hailey in a negative way and woulda been up in their arms abt possible betrayal
BUT NOOOO he considers everything out of pure concern for her health. he looks out for Hailey without being patronizing. he /wants/ to know abt the real her bc he himself knows that the person Hailey is around him, is seemingly not the same person everybody else knew her as. who could ever go out of their way to consider even long-lost supernatural abilities if not someone who truly loves you for yourself and wants to know whats hurting you !!!! he doesnt even know whats going on but hes trying his damn hardest to protect her ONLY HIMMM AAAAAAAA
totally lost the plot after scrapping the love triangle thing between the 2nd ML, the saintess, and ms. devon (mr?)
it was good and funny and the illustrations at the end of every chapter were cute. then it all went downhill bc they couldnt progress the story between the FL and ML without reducing the whole cast to plot devices. crazy thing is, the only characters that were affected were the rest of the WOMEN.
it almost got the point—when they started talking about the saintess' troubles as a commoner and a woman in an aristocratic society. YET they still used it to make her evil. meanwhile, every male and rich character here never suffered.
duke solton couldve been the ultimate villain if the story really needed one. he was supposedly the mastermind but only appeared for like... three chapters.
the OG plot couldve still happened without making the saintess the villain. it couldve made the "canon" story the whole antagonist bc that was the only death flag for kylo and kt existed without the saintess being the villain in the OG story. but no, apparently, pitting women against women is the only way for the FL to exist in a romance story.
+ ms. devon, who also had a great potential, was turned into a MALE just so we could get a glimpse of reverse harem. for totally no reason :D
they could make the two/three (?) MLs broskis but they couldnt find a way to make the other '2' FLs exist alongside Agnes. we're so never making it out of the patriarchy









god i love everyone's character design. it's fuck fjo's mother but like HELLOOOOO HER DESIGNNN HER CHARACTERIZATION R WE SEEING ITTTT