this story couldve been good. why they gotta force a weird fucked harem on this kid? can we just have a revenge story and maybe add something of substance an quality to the plot instead of random baseless harem?
I would recommend maybe one of the bullies actually repenting or at least pretending to do so for depth, and maybe a bully that protag struggles with more. if we keep the women maybe give them traits aside instead of just having them like protag. maybe make the protage a villain in his own right by making him not care about civilians and just revenge hungry, maybe make him enjoy hurting others.










good idea