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The story was so rushed toward the end. The main couple hardly got any development and Benjamin, someone who’s supposed to be a main character, got severely neglected! I’m so disappointed. The second couple got way more time as a couple than the main two. And we got what, one far away kiss from the main couple? We saw Evan kiss Webber more than Benjamin. I wanted to love this so bad. :(

I wasn’t necessarily expecting them to get down and dirty, but for the author to build the blood sucking scene up for so long and it was THIS dry? I’m kind of underwhelmed. I just expected more. Maybe even some more introspection would’ve been nice.

I do hope the following chapters pick up on the plot a little more, because so far it’s reading like a comic that WANTS to be 18+ to fill in the blank spots (because there’s not really enough plot or development to justify it being THIS slow). I really like this author so I hope there’s a new exciting arc coming soon.

The story seems interesting, but man the use of 3D assets for everything (hands, shoes, even small props) is kind of jarring with the art style. I do want to see where it goes though.

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