why is he being carried princess-style when everyone is walking, lol
Hes just a little guy
I do not like this type of story probably, idk. the protagonist is too silent and long suffering and at odds with their family over being a worst omega. It's kind of like if "my parents don't like me as much because I'm not as hot as my fraternal twin sister." I can't handle vilains this badly thought out. Plus, the ML is all dangerous and I can just imagine the whole plot at this point. The mc is going to be scared of him, then he's going to be scared that when his brother comes back he's going to take him away. It's just so dumb he's going to go along with everything people who have no interest in him set up for him. His parents don't buy him things for his birthday(which is the same as his twin's) and he's going to try to save their company? you're a grown man, just go get a job instead of marrying some rando.
this, this right here is one heck of a love triangle
so my problem is that this uke is the most boring type of uke to me He just goes with the flow. the guy who he's replacing actually seems more interesting. The only reason this istory is more than 3 chapters is because the guy the seme was originally in love with took over his body.
the uke and the love rival deserve each other. When the seme said he liked him and he asked if that guy was his boyfriend he said "yes." and slept with him anyways. What are you putting him through and why? We all know wtf the love rival did. I was hoping he'd end up with the other assistant though because she's basically the girl version of the uke
the children don't look cute, everyone has wonky eyes. the artist isn't completely sure how to draw lips. why's the hair so spiky? I can't with the art. I just can't. They are okay at drawing muscles, but only in a dbz way with everything drawn out. I just want things to look less like an amateur manga artist drew them, is all.
I do not like the plot or the characters. It's an amnesia plot because the isekaid mc basically is just a silly inexperienced 21 yo who only wants to progress the plot(have a happy ending where the two lovers are happily married). I hate these because if he had a better goal or a system the same plot would most certainly happen. I just don't like a romance plot where the mc is focusing on romance without being in love. Too third wall.
I also, personally, don't like amnesia plots at all. It's a tag i'd normally blacklist, and this mc is gradually trying to recover memories through therapy sessions every couple of chapters. I don't know what they do, but I do not care to sit around and wait. Amnesia plots to me are like cutscenes. I just feel a pressing urge to skip them the entire time.
I was just hoping that this would be more of a comedy and a smut but all the comedy amounts to is the mc getting a stupid look on his face and saying something friendly to the ml.
Lowk was not going to respond to this comment but honestly I think this is one of the best amnesia plots that has been written and that I have seen in a long time. Honestly, I really liked that you could tell overtime that MC is not a reliable narrator, especially poking holes at when spoilers he’s pregnant but in this timeline, he’s technically not supposed to be pregnant yet.
I have the same grievance as you, especially when it comes to the comedy because I don’t think it was that funny.
I guess this isn’t your cup of tea. Honestly, I don’t think it’s a lot of people’s cup of tea especially because it’s a crazy plot. Though I think the amnesia was done very well. Especially because in the end , again spoilers, he regained all of his memories, especially in the past and then in his drawing world and then still keeping the ones he has now. Some a mere plot, kind of treat the memories he has now as something else I think this one because they’ve integrated his personality and his memories now as well as his memories of the drawing world. It makes him as a more well-rounded character. Honestly, and amnesia plot for this kind of a story where you have a guy that rapes you imprisons you honestly just abuses you, it would be best to see them only in a light that is familiar and happy and for all the memories and baggage to feel like a dream and a distant past. Mc is still mad at him but forgive him because he still loves ML but only because ML changed.
Sorry, I ranted. Honestly, there’s so many other black and red flags that this guy looks like a green flag because he actually changed there was actual development. He still has his personality, however, and he still falls into bad habits, but that’s OK because he still tries to change. (づ￣ ³￣)づ i’m happy that there are people who have different opinions on the story because I also think there are things to improve in the story especially comedy. So thank you for pointing out these points!