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Im not going to lie, there was so much cliche in this manga… but- it was SO BEAUTIFULLY MADE it just reminded about why those plots became cliches in the first place. I mean come on! Even the isekai trope with the FL wasn’t just some random thing that gave her some sort of edge over getting with the hot ML (though it maybe kinda did…?) The deeper I got into it, the more cliches piled on BUT it somehow just became better and tied everything up for a nice ending instead of crashing and burning in cringe. Just beautiful hahahahahaha
And to be clear, I’ve reread this a lot already. The ending to be fair was a bit TOO neat for my liking (aka some threads were tied up a bit too early) but just let this over zealous dreamer have her mildly cardboard cut out out idealized romantic ending hahahaha
So, ngl- I think it was alright. Maybe my tastes are degrading over many other mangas I've read but I'd like not to believe that to be true...? I'll give it that there was a lot of akwardness in the writing but... I think it was cute and entertaining to some degree. If maybe the plot had been given more meat to it, I think that would be better(?) ... though that is on the basis that imma ignore the comments about the age thing and on how convinient everything was... also, the intimate relations was probably not that necessary to the plot anyway (￣∇￣")
To me I believe it all is happening cuz she has some God/writer given charming magic, and everything makes sense