beta
I think we can collectively agree that this would have been perfect if not for the third story. It had great potential, but sadly, it wasn’t executed properly. The pacing was too fast; they jumped from one thing to another. They didn’t even explain what was happening properly… No proper closure for Tianxian’s family conflict and such. They just skipped out on a lot of things. Them getting together was even shocking considering everything that has happened. Like their relationship was just purely toxic.
Nevertheless, the first and the second stories were fucking good. The poem excerpts really got me giggling. IT’S SO GOOD!! Out of all the stories, I personally love the first one It’s just too good and vv romantic ahhh It’s so well written I LOVE EVERYTHING ABOUT IT