it was just getting good too. Wonder if there is a second story to this.
The emotions between these two gives you a giddy feeling that just makes ya wanna hug something. Just wished there was more. Good job.
what the hell, thats crap to cut it off there and call it complete. They left everything wide open. That really sucks the big one.
The author is dead it's for it than it's "Complete".
No fair, you can't just end it like that. What about them getting back at those guys and taking down that church. He doesn't get to see Clarence's wing and grow in the relationship. This sucks.
Please hurry and update, want to see if he can really pitch a no hitter.
I liked the first one with the brothers, but the last one didn't
have any essence to it.
come on what the hell. it was finally getting good and you cut it off. He was going to tell his mom. want to see if their parents get together. This sucks.
this sucks, to take a sweet story like this one and then just cut it off like that. How rude. fix it.
don't like,don't read
Right... so agree
Right...(▰˘◡˘▰) so agree
I love this story but I'm a little disappointed in the ending, wanted to see jin grow and understand what kaoru is feeling and needs.
This is a true love story between the tow main characters, even if there were no sex scenes (tho i wished there were) you could tell these two do love each other. Wished there was more to this story. Like his dad and Kiyomines sister getting married. Think about it pls.