This story is too dumb and stupid SERIOUSLY NO SHIT! That uke was so stupid (napaka rupok mo) you have those big muscle and yet you can't even punch that asshole seme that want to fuck you on the same hotel and bed that he already fucked someone else. The character is so shit, the story is too Cliché i hate it Soooooo Much. It gives me headache and make my blood boil. Gaaaaa!
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Shut the fuck up you know nothing about this genre of bl, your just a female that fetshies sissy twinks getting fucked by emo gaylords But imma have break it to you that in the real world it ain't like that and most conventional gay mfs like masculine men (you should know since you clicked this, although it had the tag "bara") leave and go back to your pink princess girldick shit
I read it and it was really bad! The plot was mediocre, the uke was too naive, and seme was just dumb... there was no point in make it so unreasonably bad, I was hoping something nice because at least they looked mature but no...... (≧∀≦) it was bad, but at least I enjoy complaining about it. I just hope the author does another story with mature looking characters with more elegant plot, and relatable characters, not just dumb or silly please!!
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Went through the comments before I read the story. Now that I've finished the story and I know the context, what in the ever loving FUCK are you talking about?? I agree with what you said about stereotypical bl tops and bottoms designs and all that but what does that have to do with what they said about the story. Hell, they even were right, this story was ASS and so cliche. Sorry to say but it really is bad. Why do you make it seem like they were hating on this cuz it was Bara??, and why do you also make it seem like this story is what Bara is all about??. Cuz there are SOO many stories out there with the couple looking muscular and still having good characters and plot line.
Okay first of all. Imma compliment the art, Its good i like it, i like how they draw and their figures. The author really like to feel the readers the "Slow Burn", the anticipation, eager-ness for them to fking kiss or sex is too much to wait. Also Baka mauna pa mabuntis manganak yung horny next door bago pasila magka label HAHAHA. I like the seme is obsessed with Bunny also how he show compassion towards the Uke. Pero POTA yung katorpehan ng seme nag wawarshock talaga eh no HAHAHAHA. ヽ(`Д´)ノ
Naintindihan ko naman yung Ugali ni Uke ikaw banaman lokohin at dumanas ng Low esteem sa relationship ay talagang nakaka insecure and nakakatakot pumasok sa relationship kung di buo yung puso mo huhu...
Pakyu sa Ex ni Uke. What da pak is that reason? You want challenge in relationship yet you chose Cheating. Ay nako i choose violence towards your Face and Dick nakaka sakit ma ng Ulo (╬ ̄皿 ̄)凸
After they barge that Safe, they have been compromised of some sort of Men ... Thats the seme comes in he threaten the uke to open the safe for them for the sake of him and both of his colleagues. They taken as a hostage, but our uke and his colleagues were separated.... Our uke is known as a Computer Genius "Hacker" the plan is they will compromised this Safe containing A some sort of A very important thing ( the raws didkt tell whats inside of it) the purpose it they want to get whats inside of it, because it's so precious that it will auctioned later... Way back to present our uke was taking a conversation with seme theyre talking about a deal... Our uke said he makes him and his colleagues freed but the seme declined it's not Fair he make a choice instead for the 3 of them only 2 will get out... So our uke chose to stay and let his colleagues freed... Our seme wants our uke to work a decoder for some sort of hidden message inside the code... After that I dont know about theyre talking about an "Easter Egg" in that code it's like they're decoding the script and after it some location appeared and they retrieved something on that place... Lets forward a bit ...
Our uke and seme talk again this time our uke make a deal... He said he will work for him but he need a collateral... A sex video for both of them... And then that happened .... Seme drinks an Alcohol And make our uke Blowjobbing him our uke reply take this scene a picture... Our seme gives our uke a Phone then this time our seme will make an Entrance to our ukes hole (hehe) ~ ~ ~ ah ah nghhh squelch ~ ~ yes the bed war happened our seme is so rough to our uke that our omega uke doesnt take a clear shot of him... ~ ~ ~ squelch ngh ngh ~ ~ ~ the seme take the phone and place it to a table so our uke cannot hold it anymore ... After that ... Our seme ask his Secretary or right had man of some sort ... He asked him if what happened if some sex video leaked out ... His secretary said after I. Watch it I wont masturbate he replied....
Some prosecutors is happy to see it he said...
Our uke smirk instead while playing Candy Crush... After that ... Our Seme make a deal again, he thanked our uke for his loyalty and great job whilw serving he asked our uke what will the price of it... Our uke said "i don't want money" "i just want you to sleep beside me in bed thats all" our seme replied thats not a deal between a business partner, it's a deal between a Lover (kyaaaa!!) Then kiss ~slurp slurp ... "okay deal, but make sure give me a unconditional love" thats all the Spoiler HuHu (▰˘◡˘▰)
It's Nakyum's Sister There will be character development also the misunderstanding will be resolve soon Dont Worry It's Just A Spice To their story jUst Hang On For A little Bit ヾ(☆▽☆)
I can tell by the lady's Face, nakyum and That lady have similarities Their Eyes Emotion in Their Faces Also The expression You can See It Yourself and also Is it too bad if the author Make nakyum situation became worst? If the author do that it will have a Big Impact That makes people to drop this manwha... And I've observed some Manwha Like This Its part of their journey Though It makes their relationship stronger...JJust Hold On... There is always a Rain In A long Drought (▰˘◡˘▰)











Anyone know the official korean title? Or any Link to Raw? Links? Please Thank you (≧∀≦)
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