Okay, I guess it was a good start but she moved on too fast, it felt like she didn't really love him that much, she also started catching feelings with somebody else [her husband] while in a relationship [the ex] isn't that considered cheating? If not then she's a traitor ig [inspo by tiktok lol] also seriously why do guys in most stories fell in love like "you're the first ever some who's treated me like this...I love you!" Wow for the cliché again lol, it was cute tho
Realistic, no blackmail or such, there's no unnecessary drama, overall amazing so far