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All the people hating on Fion need to settle down a bit, seriously... (づ￣ ³￣)づ
If Lyla was truely avoiding him of her own will/desires then I would completely agree with the criticism. But from what I can tell, they’re both sad that they can’t see each other - in their own way.
Really, he’s just reading the signals; her face gives away her feelings often haha… that’s why I’m so frustrated by all of it! Why so silly, just kiss (╯°Д °)╯╧╧
Also, if she took a moment to 100% commit and demand that Fion fuck off, then I honestly believe he would. Not without a lot of begging first though lol
Anywaaay, that’s just my opinion ╮(￣▽￣)╭
The script in this is so bad, I can already tell that it’s going to drag on forever. Idk what it is but every character is annoying. They frustrate me but I can’t put my finger on why…
Honestly, I think the comment that likened it to a “wattpad story” really hit the nail on the head though. It’s such a slog to get through, so disappointing. （￣へ￣）
Oop, unlike the person who commented, I am unable to get through a “wattpad” style of writing lmao no shade here.
The story just really ain’t for me (╥﹏╥)