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Does anyone else think this is more a tell not show kinda writing style. Like its all internal monologue with like 5-10 lines of dialogue. Its starting to get on my nerves a little ╮(￣▽￣)╭
i mean this is novel-based so theres a lot of internal monologue
Smut wasn't even that good and im willing to put up with anything for a bit of smut but jesus christ. (●￣(ｴ)￣●)