tf was that ending? it felt super rushed, could have been great if they managed to work thru their problems and insecruities but that ending was so unsatisfying and shit. uff
why does it feel like with every new chap the stories gets worse? like i want to see them develope as a couple but it has only been smut and runninh in circles D:
that was shuuuupa cute!! the only critic i have is, i wish we would have bit more of yumas pov, like how he fell in love with nagisa ect. + i want an extra chap of their dometic daily life hihihi
CUTEEEEEEE! One of the best BLs i read. I love that we even got a chapter when they are older! /i just love stuff like this!/ both charas are soo sweet and i love the pacing and even how they didnt rush into sex! def gonna reread more than once!
i want an extra of their domestic life in amwrica!!!! Z^T