beta
It was a decent story, has an overall plot but was lacking with execution. It was also fast paced. Still I enjoyed reading it. There was a drama, the art was also decent but the lack of expression will make you seem lost into what the characters were thinking. Im just glad that both of them are now happy, they were so deep in the mud with how the seme wanted to avenge his family's death that he was so coward to be honest and forward with his feelings for the uke. It resulted in an incorrect actions too. I cried for their miscarried first born, I hope he was reborn as the 2nd child and is happy now.