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I don't know where my comment went so I'm writing this again. I don't like the main omega. The fact that he was too determined at first was adorable but the way he forcefully pushed Kaede to bite him didn't settle nicely with me. I decided to finish reading this though, hoping Asuza could be redeemed but heck, I am even more irked at him.
The sad thing was that Kaede (before a year long relationship with him) didn't really love him. He was just used with his presence and he couldn't leave him after marking him because he's afraid he would become just like his father. He and Hikaru would've made a nice pair if only the omega showed up earlier.
4/5 stars! The art, the relationship between the two main characters- let's start off by saying that I love them. I really enjoyed the get go of this story and how the intensity was built up, however, the only problem that I had was how the writer overdid it. I believe it was done to lure us in, hype us up, and let us see through the ending.
It is however, lacking. In a sense that the hype was over exaggerated, the reasoning for the plot wasn't able to reach the level they built from the start. It's like promising a hundred percent but they only reached around 75.
Maybe it is the lazy writing, maybe it's the rush- but I'm definitely sure it could've been better. Anyway, I still love this for the reasons I have mentioned above and I hope both Jun and Yeon-Woo enjoy their paradise a lot more.