1. The first story was a great setting for the development and I guess for Venir, Beryl and Azeral*. I agree with everyone on the part that Beryl is a shit head that need mental help, like why do you hurt others for your own deed man! Ugh 2. The second was sad, and I agree with most, why'd Venir had to become a f robot as well as his friend as well, like the f is wrong with Beryl's head. But as character development goes I feel everyone is short terms with themselves and to the story. Like for example, go deeper into their psychology would've made this really well done. I'm just heavily disappointed with the short work I guess. I see potential being written off. 3. I don't mind the third story though I'm so disappointed that I didn't get to see the full form of the seme. 4. Do!!!!n't like it so I skipped.
Ok, here's the thing. I don't like the first story. It's confusing, plotless,lack of all the elements that shows this story to be called tragic/yaoi. The only redeeming quality in this manga is the second story. Well.. Not enough but can be ok. I meant that the story needs to understandable for the readers to say it was interesting. And the art.....i guess it's a so so. Felt like I'm reading a lesbian love story cause they all looked like girl without tits and pe***s.
I hate ch1&2,venir was so kind,why did azreal have to kill him? Dont make any sense,even that his master order. And wtf,is belil head is fuck up or something,come on! Venir will treasure azeral for sure! Wwhy cnt have a happy ending? That guys has been searching azreal for yeras. Hate the ch1&2. But i love chp 3. Last chapter doesn't make any sense,is like a shit copy of love prism. Only that story is batter plot than this! I just wanna chew this author!! Mad!!!
that was strange. im not sure if i actually liked or hated it. the first two about the angels was confusing and i didnt understand what was the point of the plot , so much didnt make sense and was unclear to what outcome could possibly come from such an unexplained and incomplete story. the others were realy sad and emotional. xxx
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1. The first story was a great setting for the development and I guess for Venir, Beryl and Azeral*. I agree with everyone on the part that Beryl is a shit head that need mental help, like why do you hurt others for your own deed man! Ugh
2. The second was sad, and I agree with most, why'd Venir had to become a f robot as well as his friend as well, like the f is wrong with Beryl's head. But as character development goes I feel everyone is short terms with themselves and to the story. Like for example, go deeper into their psychology would've made this really well done. I'm just heavily disappointed with the short work I guess. I see potential being written off.
3. I don't mind the third story though I'm so disappointed that I didn't get to see the full form of the seme.
4. Do!!!!n't like it so I skipped.
needs improvement
I don't understand this topic
Ok, here's the thing. I don't like the first story. It's confusing, plotless,lack of all the elements that shows this story to be called tragic/yaoi. The only redeeming quality in this manga is the second story. Well.. Not enough but can be ok. I meant that the story needs to understandable for the readers to say it was interesting. And the art.....i guess it's a so so. Felt like I'm reading a lesbian love story cause they all looked like girl without tits and pe***s.
sorry meant I want to read more
I want to read
Not to my liking......kinda feel sick
ugh yeah
I hate ch1&2,venir was so kind,why did azreal have to kill him? Dont make any sense,even that his master order. And wtf,is belil head is fuck up or something,come on! Venir will treasure azeral for sure! Wwhy cnt have a happy ending? That guys has been searching azreal for yeras. Hate the ch1&2.
But i love chp 3. Last chapter doesn't make any sense,is like a shit copy of love prism. Only that story is batter plot than this! I just wanna chew this author!! Mad!!!
Yeah i agree
It ticked me off what happened to him. ╥﹏╥
Needs a little work
totally
too cute young boy is angel and child is angel and hurt child's angel 's wings.......
that was strange. im not sure if i actually liked or hated it. the first two about the angels was confusing and i didnt understand what was the point of the plot , so much didnt make sense and was unclear to what outcome could possibly come from such an unexplained and incomplete story. the others were realy sad and emotional. xxx
yeah, i was confused about the second story, did that kid turn into an angel or something cause he had wings at the end...