I think it's good...but just a little part where Onizawa slept with the lady...ticks me off.... I can handle any kind of caution...but not cheating...! I know this is very normalise in Japanese culture...but no...I kinda did not like that part...(Only that part) over all good. Well if you gotta do job do it by hook and crook... whether you fuck your enemy or sleep with ladies to scope out informations ...(A job well done I guess)
I know seme slept with lady but it was not that he hide it from uke he told him that he used his "man weapon" for investigation and ukd brushed it off , old yaois certainly makes it that relationship are not clear they are not in relationship seme attracted to uke also this whole investigation scene was interesting lighting facts of , corruption, politics and betrayal within , anyway it good read
These older yaois walked so new bls could run. HOWEVER, this story was not only poorly executed but the seme r*ped the uke! Like full on and he meant it too. Somehow we’re supposed to be okay with it. I dropped it right there and I’m glad I did. It seems the seme also continues to go around cheating and sleeping with different women. WOOF.
I stopped reading after the first 2 chapters, because honeslty, I don't think it was okay. The seme was too forceful, and aside the fact that he basically stalked the uke, trying to find about a part of his past that the poor man didn't want him to know because it was something that didn't bring back good memories, he fricking RAPED him. Just like that, without even having a reason. He just tied him down and raped him. Like what the fuck??
The dialogues were hard to understand and incomplete it was confusing but the plot was understood.. Still it would have been a great story if it was written more clearly
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I think it's good...but just a little part where Onizawa slept with the lady...ticks me off.... I can handle any kind of caution...but not cheating...! I know this is very normalise in Japanese culture...but no...I kinda did not like that part...(Only that part) over all good. Well if you gotta do job do it by hook and crook... whether you fuck your enemy or sleep with ladies to scope out informations ...(A job well done I guess)
I know seme slept with lady but it was not that he hide it from uke he told him that he used his "man weapon" for investigation and ukd brushed it off , old yaois certainly makes it that relationship are not clear they are not in relationship seme attracted to uke also this whole investigation scene was interesting lighting facts of , corruption, politics and betrayal within , anyway it good read
These older yaois walked so new bls could run. HOWEVER, this story was not only poorly executed but the seme r*ped the uke! Like full on and he meant it too. Somehow we’re supposed to be okay with it. I dropped it right there and I’m glad I did. It seems the seme also continues to go around cheating and sleeping with different women. WOOF.
So boring and awful. I slept through it. This made me remember how older yaois are so disgusting.
I stopped reading after the first 2 chapters, because honeslty, I don't think it was okay. The seme was too forceful, and aside the fact that he basically stalked the uke, trying to find about a part of his past that the poor man didn't want him to know because it was something that didn't bring back good memories, he fricking RAPED him. Just like that, without even having a reason. He just tied him down and raped him. Like what the fuck??
Takeda's soul, you may rest in peace.
Smexy (๑•ㅂ•)و✧
love reading this!!
I read it all,,, NO REGRETS!!!
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The dialogues were hard to understand and incomplete it was confusing but the plot was understood.. Still it would have been a great story if it was written more clearly
Welp I gave up on page 41 and no regrets man