The pace of this manga was shit. The author literally compacted a 10+ chapter manga into 6 chapters lmao I feel things would've been less cringey and had more meaning if s/he took their time to dissect the manga and added more details. Having sex does not always garauntee regaining one's memory (for kousuke). And having sex does not erase one's past (for azuma). Also it would've been more thrilling to kinda have little clues lying around to show who the spy is so readers can feel on edge for the characters for trusting the spy then when the spy is caught we can say "THERE WERE FUCKING CLUES YOU IDIOTS". but anyway, this was okay. I kind of rolled my eyes 2 times because I was confused why some things were happening so dramatically when it's not supposed to. 3.5/5 stars. At least the art looked good. Plot was good as well, but performed poorly.
I love the manga and i love all the characters including megane-kun but I felt like if there was something missing and I don't know what but there was something missing time spicy up the story.
I mean something TO spice up the story not 'time' lol yuuki
I know what you mean, I felt that way too. I think it's probably that because of how long it took for the seme (musaka?) to remember who he was there wasn't too much romance. Also a lot of the characters were underdeveloped, and they didn't really have a comeupance for the badguy.
Generally when it feels like something is missing from the story, it's a pacing issue. Parts of the story are too rushed and parts are glossed over. I am I felt that in this instance, it should have shown Kousaka falling in love
Generally when it feels like something is missing from the story, it's a pacing issue. Parts of the story are too rushed and parts are glossed over.I amI felt that in this instance, it should have shown Kousaka... HaJime
Ugh.... It cut me off....
Generally when it feels like something is missing from the story, it's a pacing issue. Parts of the story are too rushed and parts are glossed over.
I felt that in this instance, it should have shown Kousaka falling in love with Misaki while he still thought he was Yanagida. Also... The "you promised to fuck me on the 5 year anniversary of the death of the love of your life" plot line..... That doesn't really work for me.
They seemed to keep pushing that aspect of the story without showing the MCs getting to know each other as strangers. I would have liked a bit more romantic tension before the act 3 sex scene.
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ugh, Azuma just makes me sick, he is awful.
Really love this manga! <3
Give Azuma love
Give Nozomu love
Justice
"When did your memories return! "
" when I was inside you I remembered everything " OMG !!! that part cracked me up as hell !!!
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Okay....I'm going to read this since I'm a geologist....
*reads descriotion to hubs...who rolls his eyes....* let me guess.... you're going to read this one?
Your comment really made me laugh. It sounds like you have the same kind of relationship with your husband that I do with mine! LOL
Geology, mountains? This reminds me of Junjo Ito's 'The Enigma of Amigara Fault'
don't know why anybody else? Btw that shit was creepy as hell!
Geology, mountains? This reminds me of Junjo Ito's 'The Enigma of Amigara Fault'
don't know why anybody else? Btw that shit was creepy af!
romantic as possible. I'm swooned over both main characters and especially the third guy! Love conquers all aye. Xoxo romance still exists..hopefully
The pace of this manga was shit. The author literally compacted a 10+ chapter manga into 6 chapters lmao I feel things would've been less cringey and had more meaning if s/he took their time to dissect the manga and added more details. Having sex does not always garauntee regaining one's memory (for kousuke). And having sex does not erase one's past (for azuma). Also it would've been more thrilling to kinda have little clues lying around to show who the spy is so readers can feel on edge for the characters for trusting the spy then when the spy is caught we can say "THERE WERE FUCKING CLUES YOU IDIOTS". but anyway, this was okay. I kind of rolled my eyes 2 times because I was confused why some things were happening so dramatically when it's not supposed to. 3.5/5 stars. At least the art looked good. Plot was good as well, but performed poorly.
Clue #1:
http://www.mangago.me/read-manga/doubt_nishimura_shuuko/mf/v01/c001/28/
Mice one.
lol I laugh idk
I love the manga and i love all the characters including megane-kun but I felt like if there was something missing and I don't know what but there was something missing time spicy up the story.
I mean something TO spice up the story not 'time' lol
I know what you mean, I felt that way too. I think it's probably that because of how long it took for the seme (musaka?) to remember who he was there wasn't too much romance. Also a lot of the characters were underdeveloped, and they didn't really have a comeupance for the badguy.
Also maybe more smexy scenes ;).
Generally when it feels like something is missing from the story, it's a pacing issue. Parts of the story are too rushed and parts are glossed over.
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I felt that in this instance, it should have shown Kousaka falling in love
Ugh.... It cut me off....
Generally when it feels like something is missing from the story, it's a pacing issue. Parts of the story are too rushed and parts are glossed over.
I felt that in this instance, it should have shown Kousaka falling in love with Misaki while he still thought he was Yanagida. Also... The "you promised to fuck me on the 5 year anniversary of the death of the love of your life" plot line..... That doesn't really work for me.
They seemed to keep pushing that aspect of the story without showing the MCs getting to know each other as strangers. I would have liked a bit more romantic tension before the act 3 sex scene.