"Ain't homo but we got hots for each other" lol old yaois are actually funny feels like real boys talk , i enjoyed it , both stories has insecure ukes and their strong and sexually active semes ..
The art is great and I liked the idea of it, but the first story was confusing. They never explained why they were "acting" like lovers in the story, they just were and then they were doing it. There was seemingly no development or anything. The second story was better but I didn't like how the seme forced the uke. He said he was scared. If you care about him, help him through his fears.
The last couple was unhealthy. The seme took advantage of the uke and raped him multiple times. When someone doesn't even know what sex is it's not okay to just fuck them. And then fuck them when they're asleep! Both instances are clearly rape.
Normally I can still read stories about rape but this one was too much. It made me feel uncomfortable.
I don't like this. I don't want this. I'm scared. He said, while curled up in the fetal postion. that's not an 'oh senpai no!' that's real fear. And then waking up with a dick in him for daring to avoid the guy? Not an Onda fan.
The translation is horrendous... it made the plot choppy and confusing. Luckily I was able to read the originals to clarify myself. I have ultimately low standards for translations, but this is one of the worse I have encountered!!
But the dialogue was stilted and choppy. There wasn't enough character background or development to make the use of ellipses a viable idea. How can a reader fill in the blanks when they don't know jack or shit about a character? I'm not sure if it was translation or writing, but most of the first and second chapters were hard to figure out. I could grasp the basic idea of what was going on, but the finer details were lost. So, the story, to me, felt like: "There's these two guys and they kiss at school, I don't know why, but they do. Then one gets feelings, but I don't know which one, and then the other gets feelings too. One asks the other out, but I don't know which one, and the other wavers and isn't sure. A girl was being kissed and then another girl asks one out. It's all really confusing, but they end up in love. Yay!" It felt like I was being told the plot to Blade Runner by a five year old. The second story was better, but only marginally.
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"Ain't homo but we got hots for each other" lol old yaois are actually funny feels like real boys talk , i enjoyed it , both stories has insecure ukes and their strong and sexually active semes ..
The art is great and I liked the idea of it, but the first story was confusing. They never explained why they were "acting" like lovers in the story, they just were and then they were doing it. There was seemingly no development or anything. The second story was better but I didn't like how the seme forced the uke. He said he was scared. If you care about him, help him through his fears.
The rate is so low but it actually good
The last couple was unhealthy. The seme took advantage of the uke and raped him multiple times. When someone doesn't even know what sex is it's not okay to just fuck them. And then fuck them when they're asleep! Both instances are clearly rape.
Normally I can still read stories about rape but this one was too much. It made me feel uncomfortable.
Why it was really negative? The uke was negative constantly.
I have a few male coworkers that act like they gay for each other as a joke so im just waiting for them to conffess theynactally gay and going out
Sorry but i hate the last story..but i love the other story!!
I don't like this. I don't want this. I'm scared. He said, while curled up in the fetal postion. that's not an 'oh senpai no!' that's real fear. And then waking up with a dick in him for daring to avoid the guy? Not an Onda fan.
The translation is horrendous... it made the plot choppy and confusing. Luckily I was able to read the originals to clarify myself. I have ultimately low standards for translations, but this is one of the worse I have encountered!!
But the dialogue was stilted and choppy. There wasn't enough character background or development to make the use of ellipses a viable idea. How can a reader fill in the blanks when they don't know jack or shit about a character? I'm not sure if it was translation or writing, but most of the first and second chapters were hard to figure out. I could grasp the basic idea of what was going on, but the finer details were lost. So, the story, to me, felt like: "There's these two guys and they kiss at school, I don't know why, but they do. Then one gets feelings, but I don't know which one, and then the other gets feelings too. One asks the other out, but I don't know which one, and the other wavers and isn't sure. A girl was being kissed and then another girl asks one out. It's all really confusing, but they end up in love. Yay!" It felt like I was being told the plot to Blade Runner by a five year old. The second story was better, but only marginally.
The phone sex got me all hot and bothered