The author of this is prob stupid or a part time thing for her and not taking it seriously but..i'll still say it,there were too many plotholes,and i dont like the 1st story..felt like ayumu was a substitute for his brother to the seme..like the way ayumu has feelings for seme is resonable,but its waaayyy too fast for the seme,people dont connect/love each other that fast,it felt like seme was still seeing a part of atsushi in ayumu and just not saying it
i mean, i like dark story's like that. but, that last page... was 'he' that 'dragon god' that punished that man because he did not loved his wife... or something...?
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The author of this is prob stupid or a part time thing for her and not taking it seriously but..i'll still say it,there were too many plotholes,and i dont like the 1st story..felt like ayumu was a substitute for his brother to the seme..like the way ayumu has feelings for seme is resonable,but its waaayyy too fast for the seme,people dont connect/love each other that fast,it felt like seme was still seeing a part of atsushi in ayumu and just not saying it
i dont understand ch. 5...?
i mean, i like dark story's like that.
but, that last page...
was 'he' that 'dragon god' that punished that man because he did not loved his wife...
or something...?
it was okay
Poor that twins T.T i almost cry u.u
I LOVE IT!! BUT IT LEAVES A STINGING SENSATION... ><
I want more on the last chapter :c
Me too ┗( T﹏T )┛
Happy ja nai.....why didn't they finish the story where his brother was abusing him,sensei u make me quite mad.but the rest was ok.
Pfft, what? Wasn't too bad, wasn't too good, but I appreciate the art.
that fifth chapter should've been lnger. at least i think so :cccc
Sorry, i mean *LONGER not lnger
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