Cesur's manga / #Romance(13)

I was really looking forward to this, too bad the execution was quite poor. It seems like the mangaka had a lot of ideas, and they just got away from them as the story was compressed into the seven chapters. It feels a little rushed in a lot of areas, and there's just so much random information here and there that isn't even necessary or explored enough to be actually relevant. Trying to make Mizutani both pitiful and vengeful didn't really work out, either. Kusaka seemed to be the most balanced character, but overall I felt that none of them got real development. I truly feel like the drama was force, maybe because 1 volume isn't enough to cover all of the emotions and everything just went fast forward in the last 2 chapters. this manga has a lot of potential but too bad it's only 1 volume.

The art is gorgeous but the story progressed way too fast, I wish there was a more descriptive "scene" for the two main couple because main story ended on a bit of a cliffy and all the significant multiple oneshots feel disjointed, rushed, and like we are missing half the story and just dropped into a story already in progress. Extra stories seemed incomplete, or prequels/sequels lost.

That's two diffrent kinds of trauma clashing. For Uke there's internal issues like self acceptance, low self-esteem, lacking social interation. For Seme there's external issues, mother abandonment, feelings of being rejected by people he loved (like Uke), loneliness for having to leave his comfort zone (his dog, his former school). Ordinary Yaoi plot, but Yeah! this wouldn't have been a story without the lack of communication (as usual) that yaoi manga posses. .. About character development, "Kiyou" especially changed a lot, Compared to how he was like as a kid, and then now when he adopted this "I'm the root of all evil" attitude. it was a change for the worse, but he definitely wouldn't act like he did at the end if he didn't accept the worse truth to be abnormal generously. "Tsurugi" changed too, his abrupt moving warped his mind. Altough he didn't change much since reuniting with Kiyou, he just became more desperate as his tactics didn't work and his actions escalated. • • From my perspectives, characters development is basic and storyline goes with monotonous regularity