supremecurt's manga / #jealousy(41)

When they got together, the story revolved around jealousy and I was hoping for character development but uhhhh It was still a light read tho Update: Apparently, the main story was supposed to end at Chapter 4 and I wish it just stayed that way. The last two chapters was unnecessary tbh, or at least it lacked refinement. I do want to see a story revolving around Azuma, though.

It's PWP lol. The art still needs a few more polishing, especially in facial expressions (update: the artist improved somehow so yaay!). But well, it's smut and it's a light read so I'm staying haha

There's also butt fetish here but it didn't play a huge role to the storyline at all lol. Anyway, I didn't like the character development. Idk it's like it got dragged on too long and the resolution is too quick. They need to fix their jealousy issues lol.

Why did the second story end up like that??? It ended just when it was starting, what a letdown. It had potential, damn it. I was waiting to see actual character development, that ending stopped at realization. I still like it anyway, but I wish it was longer. (I read the author's notes and it seems she's thought of that end for a long time, I kinda forgive her now lol) The third story has an interesting setup. Guy brings his partner to the countryside since he's being possessive. He actually "stole" his partner from a girl before so he's scared it might happen to him, too. The story is told through his POV, it's an interesting setup.

"Shall we eat ramen?" Update: TANGINA NUNG SECOND STORY ANG SAKIT SA SIMULA GAGU PERO YES I LABET HAHAHA

aww it was cute! tho for some reason i had trouble reading it i had to read it in fragments (3 sessions lol)

hmmm i like the character design. let's see what's gonna happen update: huh, they don't really look that pretty lol. it was quite annoying how the seme is so impulsive and gets jealous easily.

This is why you don't purposefully make someone jealous. It just makes everything go worse. Interesting so far though. I like the characters, they're both broken in a way that can be salvaged. Let's see what will happen. update: good thing they fixed it up real quick. i still feel bad he felt the need to get fucked by random dudes from the street tho T-T anyways it was a good read

bruh the middle was a bit rocky but damn they ended up being incredibly cute and fluffy im gonna die