AliceInYaoiLand's manga / #college(45)

This was actually pretty good, I liked it. All the stories had me interested and I also like this kind of manga art style a lot. I wish they each had their own full extended story.

The story itself is good but the dialogue was really confusing a lot of the time. The development of the plot and characters was so random and certain reactions from characters seemed misplaced if that makes sense. I don't mean to be rude but the overall writing & dialogue of the story was a mess... This could have been really good.

I can't believe the fact that the seme took the uke's key, went into his house, and got into bed while he was sleeping, when they barely even knew each other yet and EVERYONE JUST LOOKED OVER THAT PART?! Like wtf no I'd freak out that is not okay. A basic stranger breaks into your house and slips into your bed while you're sleeping is not okay. Also the seme is irritating to me because I can't stand the no boundaries, no common sense, kind of type. It's a manga, a fake character, but just thinking about if I had that type of person around me in real life, makes me uncomfortable. The smut was still sexy tho...