kahae's manga / #adventure(64)

ch38 -- the art doesn't match the mood of the story and makes it seem kinda ridiculous? (as an artist that kinda sucks to say but presentation does affect the work :/// ) -- i also can't get behind how all the side characters are annoying (except for the elves and demon king) even if its on purpose. hero b already makes me wanna shoot him -- somehow the fact that im just as annoyed as MC and the system makes me dislike the story??? (im usually totally for killing those that deserve it but sometimes hes too extra about it so it makes me less attached to him) also i don't see how he'll ever "pass" when his character will just get more and more bitter/annoyed and prob end up as that FFF- lmao so idk what kinda loophole he's gonna find to get back to earth but i'm just getting more frustrated with the story -- maybe ill come back to this and like it more later but for now.... not my cup of tea

i wish the author could've made up another disease/eating disorder -- even if the type of bulimia he's using doesn't exist, it already has a lot of diff connotations so why not easily make something up? other than that it's lighthearted and funny so -- 3.5/5

reads like a novel~ i like the translation of cultures and fantasy into the world

it's interesting that lizel is also from an isekai/fantasy world -- i love their attitudes -- feels like a dj of makai ouji tho with dantalion and solomon LOL

kinda don't like how the girl is just a plot device for info dumps but.... ok

for once, i like the others that've been summoned with him, but he doesn't even go with them most of the time. and i feel like not investing even one point into attack is gonna bite him in the ass. and the harem vibes are starting idk if ill keep reading.

ch 22 -- how can cover art that good belong to a story this messy?!?! the worldbuilding is so......!!!!