lenaGRonyx's manga / #anticlimactic storyline(10)

"the manga feels anticlimactic, it builds up emotions but at the same time it off panels the climax" It's that.

Hey, this really needs a sequel. Are you joking? Seriously, we don't even know for Kei's cooking contest, we want to see Shouhei in his drama and how couldn't we talk about Yasu x Tsubasa's end, this was clairly implying a developpement of their relationship?!? And omg, junko-sensei's work is always... she really has the "trick" to do "THE seme"! I mean, they are such MEN you know, and they also can make it... aww SO. HOT. man! Sorry but this chapter 7?! Iksljjspzknwdyfvlsjfqjhaxlovmzjvdsghi, fckg hot!! XDD She IS a fckg goddess.

Leurs échange étaient sympas et la légitimité de leur réunion collait, c'est trop dommage. Pourquoi j'ai l'impression qu'il manque des pages mais aussi une suite, où est la fin? C'est tellement pas fluide, encore un "rapport choucroute"

Comment sa vie est pourrie

La première histoire, on dirait un raccourci, un résumé, c'est trop facile de montrer le problème un peu et conclure direct avec "quand tout va bien et que la situation est stable", ça m'a un peu énervée. Et la seconde histoire a l'air trop chou, dommage que ce soit tourné de cette façon, la façon dont s'est présenté, on peut pas mettre ça sous forme de oneshot, c'est trop court, trop résumé. C'est dommage quoi.

First, problems with the writting, so it's not good. Second, korean thing, so the lover is the one with the most social prestige, often an asshole at that and I can't coop with it. If the love interest was Muchan, this story would have been way less boring (if he didn't blackmail or rape Juheon obviously). Third, the end is abrupt.

I don't know if it's intended (well I think not) but they fell in love too fast, too hard and seems without a reason but with their nightmares and time travel, it looked like they fell hard because the time travel, because in the futur they already loved each other and so already lived their love. I liked the idea, the logic behind and the chaos it would bring.

|Chapter 34 - Dropped| First "What does he mean it's his first time?? He's been cheated on multiple times and just got out of a 3 year relationship" and like always, didn't ship with the successful rich alpha. Poorly written and bad translate, so it's too annoying to keep up (and since the "level of writting", it doesn't make sense Hesoo didn't fall in love with Taeoh, he is his type by his looks, he is kind, attentionate, in good terms with his family, cares about his son, his son loves him, his son's teacher and neighbour so they see each other all the time, and an alpha so they should be alchemy). I was waiting to see Taeoh's past (I suppose he is son of a mafia boss), but I gave up.

Hard to follow the supernatural logic, which doesn't seem really well build and also no contant, just not necessary complicated to make it looks like something amazing. And I would have prefered if while the second pregnancy, Theo took Calion as his second capri in orther to protect Seram and theirs positions, their child and pregnancy (to make believe Calion fathered the second pregnancy and to sent away Seram and their child, to rebuild Langeres). Their reunion would have been more rewarding and heart-warming.