lenaGRonyx's Manga

|Chapter 35 (tradu officielle) - terminé|

It was awesome, there's no need but I want to read more about them. It was interesting, deep, beautiful, stressfull. Was it a masterpiece? Not sure, will reread after official traduction completed.

It's really.. I don't know, I didn't realize and I was already into it. I want to know how it ends.

So it was interesting, some weird plot logique by times and the end with the baby... I would liked seeing their way through it, how their relationship worked and so on (the baby himself, what the fuck, why is it talking like an adult, hate it). The comic is great if you stop reading at the end of the main story (when at the end of the chapter Cheol-ho comes back to Jintae, tired and with a bittersweet face) after that it way less deep and builded, turned their messed-up relationship in something almost cute, like it was okay.

Too hard. Impossible to really read because your suspension of disbelief takes a punch or more every chapter.

If only it was at a slower pace and a longer story, tell us about the futur..
Downsides are romanticized rapes and forcefull sex like it's nothing, don't like it when they have sex as if an asshole and a vagina worked the same. Annal sex is different, so do it right.

|Chapter 24 - Dropped|

It looked so great, the first sex scene is overwhelming (suffocating just at drawing) but it's boring, the plot is simple and common but never wellhanded (ah... no, I just read one which was not so bad "Hydrangea Cage" but it's too short to be really noticed), it just end up with too much sex for nothing with lame dominant play and rubbish dirty talk (please, just do it right for fuck sake) and talking always leading to nothing. Plus there's a child in this story, it's like he's not there, he's an accessory in their relationship, nothing much (seriously why don't you use him in your story?)

["Haikyuu!" - Bokuto x Kuroo]