lenaGRonyx's Manga

I don't know if it's intended (well I think not) but they fell in love too fast, too hard and seems without a reason but with their nightmares and time travel, it looked like they fell hard because the time travel, because in the futur they already loved each other and so already lived their love. I liked the idea, the logic behind and the chaos it would bring.

|Chapter 87|
It made me laugh at first, too bad the author didn't keep the mood (it's poorly written so going to serious with the mood make the comic looking lame). The main problem for me is characters building. And there's thing really getting on my nerve, frist Will's tattoo keep changing place or disappearing (not important but I NEED to say it), second characters change their look without reason and logic (the reason is the author need them to be more lovable, I saw it so it's fucking annoying), third the way characters are in love or their dynamic couple ended to be too similar (Like Terry changed too much but ok, then Will ended just like Terry.. why? They are totally not the same)

["Romantic Joutou" - "Ai to Makoto"]

First, problems with the writting, so it's not good. Second, korean thing, so the lover is the one with the most social prestige, often an asshole at that and I can't coop with it. If the love interest was Muchan, this story would have been way less boring (if he didn't blackmail or rape Juheon obviously). Third, the end is abrupt.

|Chapter 2 - Dropped|

The hell? Fuck the logic. and why? First, rape, like always, and well it's just bad (this manga).

I don't know if it's bad writting or if there are chapters or frames missing, but there's a problem, it's hard to follow or immerse in. And the fact the plot turn around the fact of having a child, while there's no omega in their males couple, took a lot of my brain time, thinking "huh? how? why? I missed something? traduction? author misunderstanding? huh?"

Not very good but it was a little different (no at all for the twist in omegaverse rules, coudn't care less) and more realistic in their conflicts and it made me keep reading.
For personal taste, I have a problem with Hyeon-Oh's submissive character (too much for me to take a liking to him, I'm a proud person and I coudn't allow myself to behave like him, so I can't help thinking "Hugh, have some dignity please"), and I dislike the dynamic of their relationship cause the balance of power is too off.

I didn't understand how they ended up falling in love and toghether, one moment they were not and the seconde after they were. And the fuck buddies contract, the author forgot?
Also I wanted the cousin and secretary's love story, too bad.

|Chapter 140 - Dropped|

With just a few pages of the first chapter, I right away thought "Oh my god.. it's gonna be sexy", and it is.
I like how it is scripted too, I don't know if it's intended (cinematography is a theme in it), but frames look just like a movie (and I even think it would work if someone wanted to make a movie out of it). It's well written, it works well. I'm really excited about this manhwa.
--I kinda want to be Edd. Bitch money life and being surrended by those fuck boys asking for me. Hot men everywhere.. indecent!--
--I want MacQueen--