Miscreants And Mayhem
Smut style is not really for me, it will always sting my eyes, however... Pil-gyun.. I was scared of his girly features, childish attitude and the incest roleplay (never really passed through the "Dad" thing, I replace it by old man in my head), but I am still a simple person: he is a hella hot sex partner. --Oooh my god, chapter 12 and 13 are sooo fucking funny-- --Sex in chapter 18 was, I really think, the sexiest scene I ever read--
Keeper of the Pearl
I didn't understand how they ended up falling in love and toghether, one moment they were not and the seconde after they were. And the fuck buddies contract, the author forgot? Also I wanted the cousin and secretary's love story, too bad.
Dear Benjamin
|Chapter 45| I like it, it's a pretty built story, Isaac is dangerous and tough (for "once" the uke is cool/the cooler). But too bad cause the plot is "realistic", mature, deep and then, Felix come, with a childish attitude and ruin every serious business. The first impression is good, he is sexy, serious, looks dangerous and to know his business,.. he's a fucking leader, boss in arms trafficking, worlwide knowed, and still, you don't know how, doesn't act like it. Besides that, fell in love with Isaac out of nowhere (he spoke with him 2 times 3 sec and Bam), too fast, and started acting like a 10 years old in love, ugh.. and he speaks too much. While sensitive moments (critical emotional) he runs a monologue of love and possessiness ruining the climax yet I'm sure 4 words or conveys max 2 ideas within 2 sentences would have a greater impact. I am sad, I would have liked it more if the "heavy" and triller mood was held the whole story and so adjust Felix's character.
Safari Game
It went a little overboard no? like.. chapter 6 for first?
Walk on Water