lenaGRonyx's Manga

Not very good but it was a little different (no at all for the twist in omegaverse rules, coudn't care less) and more realistic in their conflicts and it made me keep reading.
For personal taste, I have a problem with Hyeon-Oh's submissive character (too much for me to take a liking to him, I'm a proud person and I coudn't allow myself to behave like him, so I can't help thinking "Hugh, have some dignity please"), and I dislike the dynamic of their relationship cause the balance of power is too off.

I didn't understand how they ended up falling in love and toghether, one moment they were not and the seconde after they were. And the fuck buddies contract, the author forgot?
Also I wanted the cousin and secretary's love story, too bad.

|Chapter 140 - Dropped|

With just a few pages of the first chapter, I right away thought "Oh my god.. it's gonna be sexy", and it is.
I like how it is scripted too, I don't know if it's intended (cinematography is a theme in it), but frames look just like a movie (and I even think it would work if someone wanted to make a movie out of it). It's well written, it works well. I'm really excited about this manhwa.
--I kinda want to be Edd. Bitch money life and being surrended by those fuck boys asking for me. Hot men everywhere.. indecent!--
--I want MacQueen--

Smut style is not really for me, it will always sting my eyes, however...
Pil-gyun.. I was scared of his girly features, childish attitude and the incest roleplay (never really passed through the "Dad" thing, I replace it by old man in my head), but I am still a simple person: he is a hella hot sex partner.

--Oooh my god, chapter 12 and 13 are sooo fucking funny--
--Sex in chapter 18 was, I really think, the sexiest scene I ever read--

|Episode 9 - Dropped|

["Serene Bird" - "Mania"]
|Chapter 56 - Dropped|

C'est super mal écrit, j'en peux plus. The plot isn't really the problem, it's plainly poorly written and doesn't make any sense (events, characters, dialogue). Sometimes, it's rushed and other it's just "fuck the logic". Moreover written by someone who probably doesn't understand these addressed traumas, so makes it worse

["Serene Bird" - "Mania"]

To be good, not there yet, still need more writting, experience, but not bad I think (comparé à d'autres mangas de l'auteur que j'ai essayé, sa manière de décrire le désir et la possessivité dans celui-ci sonne plus juste)