lenaGRonyx's manga / #poorly written(15)

["Serene Bird" - "Mania"] |Chapter 56 - Dropped| C'est super mal écrit, j'en peux plus. The plot isn't really the problem, it's plainly poorly written and doesn't make any sense (events, characters, dialogue). Sometimes, it's rushed and other it's just "fuck the logic". Moreover written by someone who probably doesn't understand these addressed traumas, so makes it worse

|Chapter 159 - Dropped| Too light while processing heavy plot/event, seems like the author can't make a decision and changes his mind all the time, poorly written, too much translation errors, not enough research/experience with a lot of subjects, and I waited a bit of explanation for the hermaphrodite but seems like it wasn't planned (and censored for some reason)

|Chapter 140 - Dropped|

|Chapter 69 - Dropped|

I don't know if it's bad writting or if there are chapters or frames missing, but there's a problem, it's hard to follow or immerse in. And the fact the plot turn around the fact of having a child, while there's no omega in their males couple, took a lot of my brain time, thinking "huh? how? why? I missed something? traduction? author misunderstanding? huh?"

First, problems with the writting, so it's not good. Second, korean thing, so the lover is the one with the most social prestige, often an asshole at that and I can't coop with it. If the love interest was Muchan, this story would have been way less boring (if he didn't blackmail or rape Juheon obviously). Third, the end is abrupt.

|Chapter 87| It made me laugh at first, too bad the author didn't keep the mood (it's poorly written so going to serious with the mood make the comic looking lame). The main problem for me is characters building. And there's thing really getting on my nerve, frist Will's tattoo keep changing place or disappearing (not important but I NEED to say it), second characters change their look without reason and logic (the reason is the author need them to be more lovable, I saw it so it's fucking annoying), third the way characters are in love or their dynamic couple ended to be too similar (Like Terry changed too much but ok, then Will ended just like Terry.. why? They are totally not the same)

I don't know if it's intended (well I think not) but they fell in love too fast, too hard and seems without a reason but with their nightmares and time travel, it looked like they fell hard because the time travel, because in the futur they already loved each other and so already lived their love. I liked the idea, the logic behind and the chaos it would bring.

|Chapter 34 - Dropped| First "What does he mean it's his first time?? He's been cheated on multiple times and just got out of a 3 year relationship" and like always, didn't ship with the successful rich alpha. Poorly written and bad translate, so it's too annoying to keep up (and since the "level of writting", it doesn't make sense Hesoo didn't fall in love with Taeoh, he is his type by his looks, he is kind, attentionate, in good terms with his family, cares about his son, his son loves him, his son's teacher and neighbour so they see each other all the time, and an alpha so they should be alchemy). I was waiting to see Taeoh's past (I suppose he is son of a mafia boss), but I gave up.

Ahh seke stories are super rare, I want more and a little better handed one. I don't know if there is problem with the scans or if it's just not well written, but it looked like there were pages or frames missing and not only once, so it takes you out of it.