lenaGRonyx's Manga

Too hard. Impossible to really read because your suspension of disbelief takes a punch or more every chapter.

If only it was at a slower pace and a longer story, tell us about the futur..
Downsides are romanticized rapes and forcefull sex like it's nothing, don't like it when they have sex as if an asshole and a vagina worked the same. Annal sex is different, so do it right.

|Chapter 24 - Dropped|

It looked so great, the first sex scene is overwhelming (suffocating just at drawing) but it's boring, the plot is simple and common but never wellhanded (ah... no, I just read one which was not so bad "Hydrangea Cage" but it's too short to be really noticed), it just end up with too much sex for nothing with lame dominant play and rubbish dirty talk (please, just do it right for fuck sake) and talking always leading to nothing. Plus there's a child in this story, it's like he's not there, he's an accessory in their relationship, nothing much (seriously why don't you use him in your story?)

["Haikyuu!" - Bokuto x Kuroo]

Maybe if it was longer and wellhanded, but without the baby with 4 DNA

|Chapter 14|

It was sexy but cheezy cringe, still Leo sometimes is really... woah

|Chapter 77 - Dropped|
It was fucking lame and awfully written (I have a lot of time). Plus Iri excited me at first, in like the 2 first chapters but after that his vibe disappointed me and the storyline didn't take the turn I hoped for. Kiyo is too stupid young, and everyone is lame. Cringed me as fuck